dafduc
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Brilliant. Just brillliant.
I liked the voice! The first "tears will flow", "will" is a bit out of tune, worth another take. And "you malignant fool" would be great in a Simon accent.
I would do something to set off the repeating "it's American Idol Tuesday, has-been has been made on Wednesday" - different EQ, doubling, harmony voice, or something...
The harpsichord ending was nice, but seemed disconnected from the rest of the song - maybe find a tie-in? And the instrumental lead could use a stronger "voice" - an EP or vibes with some more color to them (or a honky-tonk piano with a lot of shakes and trills).
It is a great great song. Very nice piano work - what did you use?
Daf
I liked the voice! The first "tears will flow", "will" is a bit out of tune, worth another take. And "you malignant fool" would be great in a Simon accent.
I would do something to set off the repeating "it's American Idol Tuesday, has-been has been made on Wednesday" - different EQ, doubling, harmony voice, or something...
The harpsichord ending was nice, but seemed disconnected from the rest of the song - maybe find a tie-in? And the instrumental lead could use a stronger "voice" - an EP or vibes with some more color to them (or a honky-tonk piano with a lot of shakes and trills).
It is a great great song. Very nice piano work - what did you use?
Daf