how does this sound?

[Crysiq]

hey guys so i recorded the vocals and the instrumental of this song at a studio, and recorded the rap vocals at my house. how does the song sound in general? any feedback is appreciated thanks a lot!

https://soundcloud.com/keyandarabpour/dream

 

[PDP]

Sounds pretty good,

The kick drum is a bit mechanical and fake sounding, I'm struggling to hear the vocals but that's pretty common in this genre, the guitars are masking them a bit.

Overall its a good job, has a lot going on.