How does this sound?

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OK, so I did this one for fun last night and am noticing that it's a little hard to understand some of the words, hah. Was still learning the song and found all the consonants fitted into the eighth notes a little tricky! How does it sound? Thanks!

http://soundclick.com/share?songid=9048168
 
Did you write this?

I kept waiting for the Europop dance beat! I think it's a real good candidate for the thump thump about 1/3 through.

What kind of mic are you using again?? Here's another where you sound like you have blocked sinuses. I'm thinking it's some of the processing, if any, or that the mic you're using isn't fitting with what comes from your throat.

Anyway, it's an interesting song, rife with possibility. I hope you wrote it!
 
Wow, good singing, great tune. It does sound like you have an accent, or something though. I was sort of thinking a kind of cascading harmony section for the 'battlefield' section woulda been cool!
 
I was actually expecting the electric guitars and double kick to come in at any given point in the song. The intro sounds very much like something Nightwish would have done.

Yeah, some of the vocals get a little buried.

You sound like you're clenching your teeth when you sing. If you open up a little more, it will sound a little more classically "good."

How are you gating your vocals? It sounds like you're getting a lot more background noise whenever the vocals come in.

Overall, it was a pretty cool song. It'd make great epic metal.
 
Nice singing voice. Mic technique could be a little better. Some words, particularly at the end of phrases, get lost. A little bit of harshness in the lead vocal.

I kept waiting for something to kick in but it never did. The song just kind of meanders. Lots of repeating words too... a few too many cliches...
 
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