hotel entropy - garage post avant garde

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Interesting to say the least...Im not sure Ill ever get the avant rock thing though it had more melody than some attempts Ive heard..not much more though :)
 
having never been privvy to anything at all like this in the past...

Im going to say it sounds... good? as it is by itself. I have no idea what instruments are in there? So to me it sounds as it probably should.

I don't know?


Good job ?
 
That was pure suck.

And don't give me any of that "you just don't get it" shit. Suck is suck.
 
You guys thanks for listening, at long last some place where people do go to the trouble, good day to you from my little peninsula Europe.
 
This has to be one of those troll post like I read a long time ago. Nobody could be this bad.
 
That is the best Polish rock I've ever heard :).

I actually enjoyed it quite a bit despite the apparent suck factor.
 
Ah, avant garde music. How to critique such a thing?

I think that even in experimental styles such as this, a hook is indespensible. There needs to be something that the listener can latch onto as the unifying musical theme or else it's just noise. That can be an artistic choice, I suppose, but you're unlikely to get your message accross unless there's something the listener can relate to.

As to the "suck" factor. The mix is not very good.
The vocals are too low.
Your instruments keep distorting.
The noise floor is inconsistent; when something is playing there's a lot of ambient noise, but during the breaks, you obviously muted all the tracks, resulting in a very jarring silence.
As another artistic thing, I think the drum machine undermines the "earthy" idea. (Though the other instruments work well with that theme.)

I think you've got some good ideas here, but you've a long way to go to really get those ideas across.
 
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That was the equivalent of trying to sit through Eraserhead. It's not very easy to say the least. But, as an avant garde piece, I think it has merit. Is it my thing? Not really, but it does challenge the listener.
 
experimental, alien genre... it was still poorly done. this really sucks.
 
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