Balance
I think this music stinks. Of course, I may grow out of this. I used to think that mustangs stank... Oh well, I still think they stink except the ones that were made between 69 and 73.
To be more specific,
1.the mix stinks,
2.the subject stinks. I think you should keep musical subjects to music and political/religious subjects to politics/religion.
3. The delivery is decidedly mediocre. In other words, it stinks.
If you want me to illustrate,
1.your music does not have the musicality of say stray411( I've listened to "this is life" about 20 times today alone)
2. Your delivery comes nowhere near the quality of Cwadroon's work.
3. Your mixes are some of the worst I've heard on this board.
4. You dont have the requisite flow
5. You have misconceptions about your music. You loop stuff but claim not to.
I'll give you this though, you believe in your product, so you'll get to where you are going. Nowadays, all it takes is a string belief in ones product to get where they want.
and sorry, I cant name 5 people who rap like you. I cant name five people who sing like ashanti either, but she still stinks.
the mixing guy: