Ooo I like the drum entrance at :50! I was hoping for some of that.
Maybe you've made some changes since the other responses, but I don't hear the vocals as having too much verb for this. Are there 2 different snares? I'm hearing a weird panning inconsistancy or something. One sounds slightly to the left and one more centered. The one to the left sounds awkard. A panned snare usually throws off the whole balance for me, but I could be imagining it. I see dead people.
The harmony at 2:30 is well placed. Nice job. Are you using an SM58 for the vocals. Actually to be honest it kind of sounds like SM58's all the way around. IF so, nice job with them. But the vocals lack the clarity that a condensor might give you. Just a thought.
Nice stuff!