Guilty

[gatorjj]

Hello everyone, I'm mostly a lurker here but thought I would throw a song out to get some feedback. I'd call this my first "real" attempt at putting something down and working hard at the mix.

http://www.sonomawireworks.com/riffrumbleIII/post.php?id=49

I've received some good compliments on the mix but am sure there is plenty others can find for me to improve on, I'm posting here for a wider and more experienced audience.

It's done in RiffWorks (the stuff that comes with Line6's guitar port) and has some light compression from the endorphin VST (through Reaper) post-mix. It's in a RiffWorks-specific contest (the link goes direct to my song entry, but my aim is not for cheers from this board!). I really want to see what things I need to listen for and work on.

Thanks in advance, tear away!

J.J.

 

[sikter]

Sorry no improvment points from me!
I love it! Keep posting!
sikter

 

[gatorjj]

Thanks Sikter!

Now seriously...this is the perfect mix? The contest is over, I really am looking for feedback...I kid not!

Thanks,

J.J.

 

[NegadivOne]

The only thing i would do different is maybe bring down the vocals during the verses a bit, and in the i guess its the chorus where you are singing guilty, I would bring down the talking part that is going from side to side a little bit. I really like the song though, good work.

 

[yvesa]

Very cool song, if I had to give a crit to something is I would lower the volcals a bit, but that's just me.

 

[gatorjj]

Hay guys thanks, I really appreciate the feedback! I did this on sort of a rush, and want to step back and look at it now to see what I can learn from it. I'll play with pulling the vocal levels back (I'm no vocalist, I'd be happy to bury them! ).

Thanks again,
J.J.