Guaranteed to make you piss yourself

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This is the most hilarious song, and my best work. I few things I would like a response on though.

1. How do the intro with the waiter and the main vocals sit in with the mix?
2. Can I do anything about his timbre switch when he gets to "pile of lard", we retracked numerous takes, and it's just his natural voice.
3. What genre under mp3 guidelines would this fit under?

I'm so glad it's finished, and once again, if you hear anything out of place, feel free to tear me a new one. Enjoy!

French Toast
 
dude, put a warning on it, my daughter was in the room.
 
Well as far as the actual recording itself, it sounds like the voice is in an aluminum can. I'd take off that weird reverb.

I like your quote by the way... but mitch actually says "them fellas didn't grow shit"... not "those little guys"
 
While I didn't piss myself, it reminded me of the butthole surfers.
 
butthole surfers, or as many have said, Bloodhound Gang?
 
Listening now-

Interesting.....

The echo at :36 and :39 seems like the timing is off. I would try to match the echo to the tempo more.

I actually really like the beat and pad sounds. The bass too. I like the whole song. It's like old school rap crossed with.....jeez I don't know.

Personal opinion is that it would be funnier with a little bit less bad words. Also, there are a few areas where the vocals "flow" could be a little bit more smooth. I would suggest listening to current day rappers for inspiration.

I like the music the vocals are...unique!!!

Keep it up!!
 
The reverb on the vocals is pretty brutal. The panning from left to right is pretty cheesy, cut that.

You need to fatten up the vocal track itself, sounds really brittle with all that reverb as well.

Don't know what to say about this song though, except you have alot of single double ryhmes lol.
 
I thought the panning added dramatic effect, especially with the second round.
 
and I seem to be getting crucified on the reverb end of things.
 
I really like the beat. :)

Didn't make me piss myself though. Only laughing and wild sex does that! :eek: :D
 
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