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frank1985
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Thought I might drop by to share a ditty. Would love some feedback!
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TalismanRich
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That sounds pretty cool. Really foreboding, and I dug the intro with the carnival sequence going haywire. It set the mood perfectly.
Too bad you don't have a movie to put this in. It would be a perfect opening for some slasher type of film!
Too bad you don't have a movie to put this in. It would be a perfect opening for some slasher type of film!
LazerBeakShiek
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Yeah this is really cool. It kinda goes in a bunch of different directions. The balance is excellent. Sweeping sounds from left to right..nice.
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frank1985
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thanks for the listen fellas
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frank1985
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Worked a little on stereo imaging - plus humanising the drums a bit
stratmonkee
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Love it! The Ominous vibe sounds great in the beginning like a early Black Sabbath vibe ...nice crunch, the sounds are perfectly placed in the stereo spread, great guitar. Love the kinda funky guitar at 3:40 then cool wah. Great sounds man, well done!
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frank1985
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Thanks strat!
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Bulls Hit
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Yeah definitely the Type o negative Black Sabbath vibe. Sounds really good, musically interesting. Nice choice of sounds and effects. Kick ass funky wah thing at the end rounds it off nicely. Great job
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jonlint
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Great stuff man! The drums need some work to me - that to me would lift this song to another level. They need some more grit, reprogramming, humanizing and more room mic/ambience in the mix. Drum mixing is not easy I know but it would make a huge difference to me. Other that than, its all there, man. Love the guitar and effects in this. Great panning and pan automation too. Hope this helps.
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frank1985
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Thanks for listening. Those are my thoughts also - I‘ve always struggled with mixing drums. Glad to have someone highlight that as I can give it more attention.
