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Lovely melody Ido!
Lovely sentiment as well.
The bass needs a little more mid I think - the growl is there & a bottom end but it's a little thin in the gut - unlike me of late!
The drums are a bit loud - or the top end of the snare hi hat & cymbals are cutting through too well.
No solo?
Vocals & guitars sit beautifully together.
 
Very nice Gerry.:)


I like the lyrics, I am glad you posted them. My only nit with the vocals is that on about 2 or 3 notes, you seem to be "cracking" the high notes. In other words, the key is too high, or you could figure out how to sing this notes a 3rd/5th down.

Very nice song.
No solo?
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There was a solo, a tasteful one.;) Drums seem a lil blase, but they are fine. As always a very well written and tasteful track.:cool:
 
Nice tune...I'd like the rhythm guitar a touch louder myself...it's quiet compared to the drums. Other than that, I like it. Cool one man...
 
Ray, David, Ed - thank you for the listen and the kind words...

I sat down to write a grad song, and this is what developed.

... Bass has always been a tough one to eq on my system. I will play around with it and see what I can do. Drums are stereo tracks which I can take down a tad. Solo is there but is very subtle....;)
... The key is within range but those couple of notes are a little weak and could be redone. I think I did quite a few takes that day and I might have been a bit tired.
... once I take down the drums I'll see how the rhythm sounds.

Thanks again !
 
Very nice, Gerry,
This is a tough genre to pull off. Sentimental and sincere and it comes off pretty well. the vocals are a little weak at points, but you get away with it. The guitars are at a good volume and the tone is sweet.

It's kind of like Clapton's Wonderful Tonight, but doesn't have the signature lick. That might be something you could add.
 
Xeries said:
Very nice, Gerry,
This is a tough genre to pull off. Sentimental and sincere and it comes off pretty well. the vocals are a little weak at points, but you get away with it. The guitars are at a good volume and the tone is sweet.

It's kind of like Clapton's Wonderful Tonight, but doesn't have the signature lick. That might be something you could add.
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The solo would probably fit well as a signature lick..... Thanks for the listen and the good comments....

:D:D:D:D
 
Some good songs here today.:) I could critique little things but I'm thinking I'd be missing the point if I did. Nice lyrics in this, sincerely delivered.
 
XLR said:
Some good songs here today.:) I could critique little things but I'm thinking I'd be missing the point if I did. Nice lyrics in this, sincerely delivered.
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Thanks Tim, I appreciate the listen and the comments.....:):D:):D
 
Sounds pretty good. Mellow song. Nice jangly guitar tones. Some of the vocal lines jump out a little much. Maybe compress them a little more. Maybe also add some vocal harmonies in there somewhere. Other than that, sounds pretty good to me.
 
Hey Ido, enjoyed listening as always. Grad song? Could this be a gift for someone(?) Cool. Your lyrics show a lot of thought.

I hear a little clipping on the vocals and i hear what some of the others are saying about the bass, etc. Other than that, eveything sounds good. Nice song with a nice melody and sung well.

Cheers,
 
I like it ido!

Lyrics are perfect and vocals are just right. I love the song. The guitar chords and tones ... great! Solo fits the song just right.:) I think you could bring the kick down if you wanted to. Always soundin good ido!:)
 
Greg_L said:
Sounds pretty good. Mellow song. Nice jangly guitar tones. Some of the vocal lines jump out a little much. Maybe compress them a little more. Maybe also add some vocal harmonies in there somewhere. Other than that, sounds pretty good to me.
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Thanks Greg - I'm compressing the vocals a tiny bit on the way in, maybe I can turn the knob up a little and/or work on my mic technique...
Chili said:
Hey Ido, enjoyed listening as always. Grad song? Could this be a gift for someone(?) Cool. Your lyrics show a lot of thought.

I hear a little clipping on the vocals and i hear what some of the others are saying about the bass, etc. Other than that, eveything sounds good. Nice song with a nice melody and sung well.

Cheers,
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No the song is not a gift, just trying to write about that theme.... Appreciate the comments, I will look into them...

Erockrazor said:
I like it ido!

Lyrics are perfect and vocals are just right. I love the song. The guitar chords and tones ... great! Solo fits the song just right.:) I think you could bring the kick down if you wanted to. Always soundin good ido!:)
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Thanks Erockrazor, I'll remix this bringing the drums down (it's a stereo drum mix so no individual drums)...

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Vocals are very good, Gerry.

The drums are a tad on the robotic feel side ... and so I'd probably lay them back a bit further ... I'd brighten the snare too ... just a little.

Bass and guitars could come much more forward. Take a little meat out of the guitars, kick the high end of them a little, and you could seat them right around the vocal pocket.

Lock the bass to the kick, ride it on top of it ...

and you're good to go.

Best,

Kev-
 
K-dub said:
Vocals are very good, Gerry.

The drums are a tad on the robotic feel side ... and so I'd probably lay them back a bit further ... I'd brighten the snare too ... just a little.

Bass and guitars could come much more forward. Take a little meat out of the guitars, kick the high end of them a little, and you could seat them right around the vocal pocket.

Lock the bass to the kick, ride it on top of it ...

and you're good to go.

Best,

Kev-
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Thanks K-Dub, lots of good suggestions for my remix. Appreciate the listen and the feedback! :D
 
Nice song and a happy one at that....wish I could do songs like that.:o It has a 60's vibe to it and the guitar backing and solo are so melodic.
Good job from both of you.
 
Anfontan said:
Nice song and a happy one at that....wish I could do songs like that.:o It has a 60's vibe to it and the guitar backing and solo are so melodic.
Good job from both of you.
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Thanks Anfontan!
 
Nice! You do have that Clapton-ey sound to your voice, which is cool. I liked the guitar solo, but it was too short! Needs more cowbell... err, I mean guitar solo!

(Ok, I realize a lot of people hate guitar solos, but I'm not one of them. ;))

Nice work. :D
 
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