"Fractured" I need experts feedback

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Hello!

This is my first thread, so... I want to say hello and thanks in advance for your answers... this forum is priceless, you guys are so nice to share your knowledge and helping others, God bless u all!

Well, this is my first work as a engin"ear"... so I really want a real feedback from you guys, please critique the mix, the master, the song, the lyrics, musicians... whatever you ear!

Thx again, I hope you enjoy the song!

Band: Versus
Song: Fractured
Release: Jan-10
Tags: Rock, Power Ballad, Drama

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I like this kind of stuff!! This is clean! Good guitar tone. Great vocals (this dude sounds like Bon Jovi) a real quality vocal here. I love the lengthy guitar solo and instrumental jam towards the end, it kinda went prog-metal for a bit there. A well balanced mix imo. When nothing "pokes me in the ear", I call it a good mix. The only thing I would have reconsidered, if I had a great voice like that, are those melodic volume swells (whale calls) following the vocal lines in the verse. I wanted to hear his vocal pure and vulnerable there with nothing to distract.
I'd buy their record! :D

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Brad
 
maximusbs said:
I like this kind of stuff!! This is clean! Good guitar tone. Great vocals (this dude sounds like Bon Jovi) a real quality vocal here. I love the lengthy guitar solo and instrumental jam towards the end, it kinda went prog-metal for a bit there. A well balanced mix imo. When nothing "pokes me in the ear", I call it a good mix. The only thing I would have reconsidered, if I had a great voice like that, are those melodic volume swells (whale calls) following the vocal lines in the verse. I wanted to hear his vocal pure and vulnerable there with nothing to distract.
I'd buy their record! :D

:cool:

Brad
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Hey Brad,

Thx for your reply bro! I'll try without those "whale calls"

Check this video mate... same record... a little more metal-prog song.

[video=youtube;https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IFdSbKpRtiA]video[/video]



regards!

Gregg
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This is really awesome! The guitar tone is smooth. The vocals are a bit airy though. Bring some bass into them. I like the use of the synths in the chorus. Gives it a nice full sound. The drums need to come up and add a bit more bass. Other than that, it sounds really good.
 
squibble94 said:
This is really awesome! The guitar tone is smooth. The vocals are a bit airy though. Bring some bass into them. I like the use of the synths in the chorus. Gives it a nice full sound. The drums need to come up and add a bit more bass. Other than that, it sounds really good.
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thx mate!
for the bass guitar, you mean more bass level, eq, or better compression for more sustain? I've Samson resolv 50a monitors and I think they send me low bass frecuencies so I use phones and a home music system to set the right level for bass(using other music as reference)

I agree that vocals need a little of bass too... for drums I'll try less ambience.

thx again!

Gregg
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Sweet! Sounds great to me! I could use a tad more bass, too--but that's a tiny nitpick considering how great this performance and recording sounds!

You're done. You're a rock star.
 
Great Stuff - Mix sounds well balanced to me.
 
WhiteStrat said:
Sweet! Sounds great to me! I could use a tad more bass, too--but that's a tiny nitpick considering how great this performance and recording sounds!

You're done. You're a rock star.
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Thx for your words bro!

btw I loved your tutorial "Stereo recording an acoustic guitar"
any problem to do that with a Rode NT1-A and Behringer B-2 Pro?

regards!




arcadeko said:
Great Stuff - Mix sounds well balanced to me.
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thanks for listening!

regards!

Gregg
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Gregg
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youd be better sticking this up in the Marketing forum...apart from this being the mix clinic threads disappear from the front page pretty quick...nice tune btw
 
Sounds OK, honestly a bit dated though, like White Snake or sumtn, IDK.
 
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