Armistice
Son of Yoda
Sounds very nice - I love that type of slightly trembly chick voice... and everything seems to fit well. I'm only listening on small headphones via the work PC though, so not getting the full detail.
Song-wise I didn't think the repeated echoey lines worked, or not for me anyway, I was expecting the chorus at that point - and I think the third one needs to come forward a little, it sounded a bit quieter than the first two.
Apart from that, all good. Nice work.
Song-wise I didn't think the repeated echoey lines worked, or not for me anyway, I was expecting the chorus at that point - and I think the third one needs to come forward a little, it sounded a bit quieter than the first two.
Apart from that, all good. Nice work.
J
James21
New member
Not bad. Love what you did with her vocals, i agree not sure how i feel about the repeated parts. if she had some ewwwssss and ahhhsss behind her vocals that might be cool, the panned instruments sound good but at times it makes the mix feel lop-sided. love her voice and the bass line
bagpipe
New member
I enjoyed it. Good song and I like her voice, although I'm not really a fan of those continual vocal runs ie hit every note. Might be better if she just stuck more to the melody. I also found the rhythm guitar to be too loud and distracting. But those are minor points - overall, I liked it.
Clam Soup
Project 49
I'll be the third to get "critical" about the muffled echoes. .... better for my ear if the voice came in dry behind the lead. Having said that, I can listen to this stuff all day long. And, I love the harmony points. I write a ton of music with this type of voice in mind for leads, backs, and duets.... really nice.
The hardest thing for me to listen to is the bass in the beginning. It fits really good in the mix, but when it is out there by itself it sounds too forward..... I thought we were going to break into jazz.
The hardest thing for me to listen to is the bass in the beginning. It fits really good in the mix, but when it is out there by itself it sounds too forward..... I thought we were going to break into jazz.
Elton123
New member
Thanks so much for listening and all the great feedback!!! Certainly some great point were made that need to be addressed and considered.
arcadeko
Illuminatius Overlordious
Bass sounds great as do the vocals. Guitar interlude is nice too.
Yeah lose the delay'd voice - might not need anything there. Or maybe a new recording of the vocals sung much much louder but them mixed in at that real low volume...
I think I would have preferred a fade out ending but that's probably just personal preference
Great song
Yeah lose the delay'd voice - might not need anything there. Or maybe a new recording of the vocals sung much much louder but them mixed in at that real low volume...
I think I would have preferred a fade out ending but that's probably just personal preference
Great song
sikter
New member
Nice one
Thank you for sharing!
sikter
Thank you for sharing!
sikter
toad_uk
Member
Love it. Don't think I could improve on it, although I do agree with the others about the repeat vocal thing. Although on second listen I was warning to it. I liked the bass.
reganito
New member
very realistic sounding. Nice depth and tonal balance. my only grip is the echo vocal. There is potential for it, I just don't know how. It's a cool idea.
dainbramage
Well-known member
Great song, great voice, great production, other than...
...I don't really agree with what others have stated about the bass sound: I think it needs more lows.
...I don't really agree with what others have stated about the bass sound: I think it needs more lows.
Elton123
New member
Revised. Took the repeat vocal way down and varied the effects. Made some volume adjustments in the guitar. Thanks so much for listening and the great feedback!!!
toad_uk
Member
Love it. Except those echoey vocal bits. Personally I think they need to be either up or not there at all, it almost sounds like it's something that's been left in by accident, like a bleed onto another instrument. Liked the reverb.