first mp3 in a YEAR

[aprilchangedme]

hey everybody...its been awhile. My old IUMA site is all screwed up, but if any of you heard/remember my old stuff, let me know if you think im going up, down, or whatever you want. Anyway...this is all one take, but i think it turned out well. I already have improvements im mind conserning the dynamics of the whole thing and all...but i think its worth a listen. please let me know what you think! heres the link: www.purevolume.com/seanpatrickmiller the song is called snakes. Give me some feedback!!! thanks!

 

[joro]

Ok...
They say you gotta be cruel to be kind.....

Recording wise....the tone of the guit is pretty good...a little bassy...
The vox is not so badly recorded....but it lacks in the talent department man..............sorry.
Musically the timing is all over the place on the guit and the vox....
Couldn't really follow the lyric man...lack of a hook and structure for me man....really wanders....
I think I did listen to your stuff before man...I recognize you moniker...
I can't remember if it is an improvement or not....sorry.

Joe

 

[aprilchangedme]

well...i recorded this in about an hour with one mic and one guitar, just trying to have a session and all; and i dont think i have a talent problem. I dont know...but if theres nothing underlying there than i just dont think you understand it. Thanks for your honest criticism; i hope i can prove you wrong with a final version.

 

[joro]

Thanks for your honest criticism; i hope i can prove you wrong with a final version.

me too man....

me too....