Lots of pitch problems. Guitar is very out of tune in both recordings. Your singing is also quite flat.
You're in the ballpark, though, which means you're not tone deaf. You may need visual reinforcement in order to learn proper pitch. I've heard people have good success with this:
Sing the right note - Home
As far as the recordings go, they sound muffled. What's your gear line-up?
Thanks for the feedback! For some reason, I find it very difficult to sing with recordings. I've been told that I sound much better live. I will definately give that resource a shot and hopefully it will help. Perhaps with my guitar being out of tune, I was naturally following some flat string too closely without realizing it. I will certainly remember to tune my guitars first next time and put on some new strings (my old strings probably didn't help much on these two songs). Either way, I at least know where I need to start improving, so thanks!!
My gear line up is this: MXL990 condenser mic (cheep, low end I know, but all I can afford for now), Bheringer x2442 USB mixer,
Adobe Audition. I plugged the guitars (Takamine acoustic, Cort electric,
Fender bass) directly into the mixer although I plan on playing around with amp micing for my next song intead of DI. I just remembered that I recorded the vocals sitting down (big mistake I'm sure). Also, I recorded all the parts except the drums in my dining room. I now have a little studio setup in my garage which is treated a little bit, so that should help out in the future as well.
Also, I mixed through low end headphones (not designed for mixing), but now have some actual studio monitors (KRKs). So, I'm sure that will help as well when I go back to mix these songs again. Also, I may re-record them and try to get rid of the pitch issues.