M Mat1515 New member Mar 29, 2005 #1 Finished Song For Review Just Recorded Wrote and Finished this in about 8 hours
jake-owa Banned Mar 29, 2005 #2 Needs a bass badly. The song as a whole has no unity or cohesion. Some of the harmonica parts sound like a casio being played by some little kid. The singing is weird and not really "musical" or "in key" at all. The end sounds like it caught you off gaurd. Is this what you honestly consider a "finished song"?
Needs a bass badly. The song as a whole has no unity or cohesion. Some of the harmonica parts sound like a casio being played by some little kid. The singing is weird and not really "musical" or "in key" at all. The end sounds like it caught you off gaurd. Is this what you honestly consider a "finished song"?
M Mat1515 New member Mar 29, 2005 #3 No Because it only took me 8 hours. There will be a remake Thanks for your input Also there is a bass I guess the level is too low on my Monitors it sounds fine iI guess it's my square room causing the problem
No Because it only took me 8 hours. There will be a remake Thanks for your input Also there is a bass I guess the level is too low on my Monitors it sounds fine iI guess it's my square room causing the problem
R RobertN New member Mar 29, 2005 #4 I dont mean to hurt your feeling but, that sounds like you didnt use much effort.