Finish this line:

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Rokket said:
You fill my desire or

You're the one I desire or

whatever....





It's a line written into almost every love song in one form or another. The cliche' is to rhyme it with a line that ends in "Fire".

See if you can come up with something original. Let me know how you would finish this off and avoid the cliche. I am not trying to write this as a song, just want to challenge you a bit.

I want to be by her,to feel the de-si-re.
My pant's are on FIRE! :D
 
You're the one that I desire,
ahead of the curve, a love outlier....
Come with me and we'll retire.
Our writhing bodies will perspire,
as I take you higher and higher and higher....
 
we couldn't get much higher,come on baby light my fire...geeeeeeeze, that ones already been done... :D

You are my desire..To reach beyond...
To seek of wonderous things...
Of knowledge..Seeking the fire..
You are my desire.... :)
 
dgatwood said:
You're the one that I desire,
ahead of the curve, a love outlier....
Come with me and we'll retire.
Our writhing bodies will perspire,
as I take you higher and higher and higher....
Something to make love to , no doubt.... :)
 
Rokket said:
Something to make love to , no doubt.... :)

But only if the girl's a math major.

Sadly, the use of the word 'outlier' significantly limits the song's appeal. :D
 
dgatwood said:
But only if the girl's a math major.

Sadly, the use of the word 'outlier' significantly limits the song's appeal. :D

I actually use that word frequently in daily life......I'm a NERD!
 
I dont get the question lol....

Your the one i Desire i love you no matter how much you perspire during basketball cuz i know you tire then sleep with me so your admired Muahahah

edit that out.... muahahhaah :eek:
 
Wow. How many more can come up with ways to finish it. I will give a whopping 9 points to the one who can make me piss my pants laughing.
 
Finish this Line..

"You fill my desire"...

100 Octane love-juice
cost per barrel goes higher
I'll pay 'til my pipeline comes loose.. YyyyAAAAHHHHHHHhh!!!


:p
 
So... let's say a bunch of long-lost pages of the LOTR trilogy are found that explain something about Gandalf's love life... maybe containing something like this:

You're the one that I desire---
the hottest chick in all the shire.
So what if I stand three feet higher,
my sweet Maria MacIntyre?
 
dgatwood said:
So... let's say a bunch of long-lost pages of the LOTR trilogy are found that explain something about Gandalf's love life... maybe containing something like this:

You're the one that I desire---
the hottest chick in all the shire.
So what if I stand three feet higher,
my sweet Maria MacIntyre?
Pretty good, but it needs to be funny without a back story.... :D
 
You're the ones that I desire,
Said the Priest unto the Choir,
Young boys I do admire,
Though to touch would force me to retire,
Man of the cloth I am, no liar,
So these thoughts should reach no higher,
though they do make me perspire,

(wrong I know, but 9 pts sound good!)
 
You're the one that I desire,
even though your straits are dire
and your stomach is a tire.
Lipo just might help you, sire,
if your nose hairs weren't like wires...
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but that's why God invented pliars.
 

Feels like my dicks on fire
Or like its been in a dryer
Now I know that you’re a liar
And you look like Richard Pryor

Your sign said “pussy for hire”
Why did I become the buyer
Now the one that I admire
Is my Penicillin supplier





How's that?
 
ez_willis said:

Feels like my dicks on fire
Or like its been in a dryer
Now I know that you’re a liar
And you look like Richard Pryor

Your sign said “pussy for hire”
Why did I become the buyer
Now the one that I admire
Is my Penicillin supplier





How's that?
It's edging out the competition (mostly for that last line), but I want a couple more submissions. :D
 
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