female singer, cutesy song

[SnoboarderX27]

So I just came across these recordings that I did for a friend in high school, and I'm wondering what suggestions you guys might have.

Let's focus on the song "ShoKneToe" (short for shoulders, knees, and toes)
http://www.myspace.com/lynnclovely

I know there are several rhythmic issues with the performance, but how about the mix? Did I squish it trying to get volume? There's a lot going on, is it too much?

Thanks.

 

[r4m]

Mix sounds great to me!
Yea, loads of timing issues.