Feedback please

[jerberson12]

This is a 1 minute demo song ive edit and mix. No Title. And Dont mind the lyrics Any feedback please? How did i mix? tune? overall? well?

http://www.nowhereradio.com/jerberson/singles

 

[13th_Omen]

Overall it seems a little bassy and the drums sound muffled. Though, this could be a result of the file compression and/or the fact that I have to listen lo-fi.

 

[jerberson12]

Overall it seems a little bassy and the drums sound muffled. Though, this could be a result of the file compression and/or the fact that I have to listen lo-fi.

You hear muffled drum sounds? maybe its the tomtom mixing with the kick and snares. it seems that you barely hear the tom or something anyway this is the second time i play the bass track and i know the first one was better using a midi keyboard. the second one i use the guitar with MIDI PICKup through guitar MIDI synth. oh well thnx anyway, cool feedback

 

[Outlaws]

You gotta EQ out some of the highend on that damn triangle sounding thing. ...the Shit hurts!

Otherwise its a good sound overall.

Should have asked in the MP3 clinic forum....

 

[jerberson12]

Overall it seems a little bassy and the drums sound muffled. Though, this could be a result of the file compression and/or the fact that I have to listen lo-fi.

You hear muffled drum sounds? maybe its the tomtom mixing with the kick and snares. it seems that you barely hear the tom or something anyway this is the second time i play the bass track and i know the first one was better using a midi keyboard. the second one i use the guitar with MIDI PICKup through guitar MIDI synth. oh well thnx anyway, cool feedback

 

[jerberson12]

You gotta EQ out some of the highend on that damn triangle sounding thing. ...the Shit hurts!

Otherwise its a good sound overall.

Should have asked in the MP3 clinic forum....

I act like a dumbass and i would take it if i ask what the hell do you mean about the triangle thing?

 

[Outlaws]

I act like a dumbass and i would take it if i ask what the hell do you mean about the triangle thing?

What the fuck did you just say?

You speak in English?




I just listened to it again and its there. The first time is right around the 2-3 second spot. It happens more or less all the way through the song. Its not bad....just lessen the damn high pitch ringing.