Feedback on metal tune

[Adeus]

Hey all, can i get some feedback good/bad on this tune.
All comments on all aspects are welcome.
thanks
http://www.mp3.com.au/track.asp?id=17770

 

[Slackmaster2K]

Holy shit, this was unexpected. Excellent and convincing the entire way through. Didn't fluff out or get melodramatic.

Good work!

Slackmaster 2000

 

[warlock]

Nice job. My kind of music too. Just a bit too hardcorish to my taste. Liked the guitar tone. And the way it was mixed.

Keijo

 

[zer0sig]

adeus, good stuff-not only is the recording pretty solid, but the style is rather original.

 

[Scriabin]

good morning, satan.

 

[Gargamel]

YESSSSS!!!!!!!!!!