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sk8a123
New member
hey guys I'm looking for feedback again. ANY problems there might be, let me know!
klutzee
lafhlkhdsfluayroeytg
you know...it sounded ok at first...then the two crash cymbols on the whole notes...eeehhhh....then when the triplets on the hi hat came in you lost me...the guitars didnt sound bad though.
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sk8a123
New member
lol. Those werent triplets. They were sixteenth notes -.-
klutzee
lafhlkhdsfluayroeytg
LOL Well at least you knew what I meant.... I knew they werent quarters!!!hell...Im just a self taught guitar player!!!
FunkDaddy
New member
Guitar sounds a bit out of tune at points. But I like the tone.
The 16th pattern on the hi hat gives the drums away quite obviously as fake. The 8th notes sound a little more in the groove. The repeated crash cymbal is also a bit odd sounding, just leave it on the start of the pattern, or trigger a different cymbal as they are quite obviously the same sample.
The 16th pattern on the hi hat gives the drums away quite obviously as fake. The 8th notes sound a little more in the groove. The repeated crash cymbal is also a bit odd sounding, just leave it on the start of the pattern, or trigger a different cymbal as they are quite obviously the same sample.
rayc
retroreprobate
The high hat think doesn't help the song along at all. It sounds like you pushed the wrong button on the drum machine. Prior to that it was developing a groove. the is a sense of out of tune with a note early (6 sec) on that seems to repeat so it may be deliberate. Is there a bass in there? It'd help settle the issueof that note but emphasising or clarifying the tension. If it is there it isn't doing its job properly.
Sounds like you have a couple of good ideas for a song but you may need to work on them a bit more.
Sounds like you have a couple of good ideas for a song but you may need to work on them a bit more.