Fam What is this beat missing?

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i dunno I'd say maybe a hard ass baseline or somethin, sounds good though
 
Yuh that may be it...but do yall think i should take somethin out or ADD some type of fxs
 
The back up piano sounds out of tune, which causes me to lose focus on the main rhytm and enjoyment of the beat. And like vmock said u need a much stronger and punchier baseline. Change it up every couple bars.
 
Agreed with what QB said but....(here comes the list)

I would drop the volume on that pizzicato (it's killin it)
Raise the hi-hats up a little bit
Add some snares
And add another melody with a nice synth with some change ups.

It's good but it has potential to be better than good youngun.

Fiev.
 
To me there's too much going on.You have to leave room for the artist to spit over.I'd take something out.Either the piano or the pizz.But I can see where this could be tight.
 
I honestly think he can leave it (and actually add a little more) just mix it a little better so one instrument isn't overpowering another one

Nah mean?

Fiev.
 
Aight good look fam...Ima work on this joint later on by putting all yalls constructive criticism to work...Appreciate it
 
toome the piano soudned not in tune iwth teh pizz, but its good, iw ould say add some bass caus its non-existent and some background synths to flow wit it, also bring out the hihats liek someone mentioned because that is what drives the drum patterns, hope that helps
 
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