False Paradise, new mix

[jndietz]

Hey guys...I recently posted a lot of songs for critique and now I'm trying to work on them individually after you guys posted comments. Here is my re-mix of False Paradise after moving my mixing/tracking room around to accomodate the bad bass response. Timing issues aside, let me know how it sounds. Thanks!

Old mix:

Latest mix:
http://www.lightningmp3.com/live/file.php?id=18072

 

[jndietz]

bumping it to the top

 

[jndietz]

Last bump before I guess before I let it die.