Whatever voodoo you put on the vocal, ease back on it a couple degrees - it's ever so slightly obvious.
The song writing is good and overall the sound isn't bad, but it could use a little work. The cymbals could come down in volume a bit and the acoustic could be low passed a little too. The piano also sounds very thin, I don't if it's because of how you processed it, or the samples/keyboard you're using just sounds like that, but I'd find a way to get more bass. If you recorded it though midi, try to find another piano vst with more bass and double the piano part to try to add some bass/lower mid fullness. You're voice has a lot of lower mids and I think cutting a bit from the bottom would help the song as well as adding a little more reverb or delay in the opening section. Overall it's a very nice song.
Whatever voodoo you put on the vocal, ease back on it a couple degrees - it's ever so slightly obvious.
I really like this one - I think you've gone and dropped yourself smack dab into the center of what you do best. This is one of my faves of yours. And I've only heard it the once. If you ever hear a tune of mine where I copy that chord change you did at the end, all I can ask is that you understand.
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I thought for the most part the mix was good, bass could come down a notch to remove some rumble (could be my system) and the cymbals were still out there for this type of tune. As a personal taste, I would pull the cymbals back underneath the vocals. Vocals are so good and focused, I would make sure nothing interferes with them.
Good tune.
I think sound really good. Still at 50, the highs are still a tad high, but not enough to change just for that. I think the bass sounds nice a full, I didn't hear any rumble in the sub, just nice lows. mids are all nice and settled, real full sound. For my ears, great tune, great mix. You might want to cut the end off sooner, I heard this rumble and thought my stereo developed a hum.
Good work.
I enjoyed this, great songwriting and vocals. There's some high peaks towards the end which could be cut a bit in your eq on the vocals, cymbals and keys but other than that I really like it
I'm 55. I obviously need that 5 year extra boost in the highs.
I simply forgot to fade the end ... for the same reason noted above.
Vocals sound nice.
I'd turn the toms up around 1:12 when they kick in. just a bit. I'd turn up the snare. It's too far back to my ear.
I'd add another layer to the harmony vocal that starts at 2:16. Fill it out just a little more. Not a new harmony part - another layer to the existing part.
Big pop at :28 around the phrase "take your time." A smaller on around 3:18.
In the outro, when you're really belting out the vocal... I think you pulled the vocal level back a little too much.
Everything else sounded good to me.