mac,
This is a good song. To my ears, there is nothing wrong with the mix; though if it were mine, I would move the vocals back a bit. I love the harp track in the left center, simultaneous with the git leads in the right, good stuff.
I think some 'verbed out backing vocal harmonies located way back in the mix would be very tasty.
The song has that "twilight" vibe going on, you know, the introspective period of time between what has happened and what is about to start happening. The quality is really great, I dig all the sounds. I say, good work, good tunes, keep it up.
peace and love
-grey