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Something I quickly laid down today. Sorry for poor quality in places.
I hope you enjoy it, please listen to it all the way through as it grows.
Also, it's an Acoustic version, not the final one.
Thanks alot

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/atlus_music.htm
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When I wake up,
I'll be older,
And some way from here.
Because everything seems different now
When it seemed so clear.
But I was dreaming of memories.

By the call of the running tide,
You were standing there, side by side,
The ocean breeze going overseas,
If only I could find the keys to your dreams.

Maybe I'm not the one for you
But I just don't see the point
How I lose more than I gain
And when I just to place the blame on you.

When I grew up,
And things were different,
But did you know my name?
When nothing ever comes to mind,
I'm seeing so far down.
Because I was dreaming of memories.

By the call of the running tide,
You were standing there, side by side,
The ocean breeze going overseas,
If only I could find the keys to your dreams.

Maybe I'm not the one for you
But I just don't see the point
How I lose more than I gain
And when I just to place the blame on you.
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The singing needs some work, I know, which is why I've booked singing lessons. Hope I can get a better version up soon.
 
I like it man. Got some good ideas, just need to work on the recording a little more, although its still pretty good to say you just quickly laid it down. The first riffs sounds really like a song... that i know... but i cant put my finger on it!! Ill remember it and post the name, its a really popular band..

But yeah, anyway, nice track man.
 
Tifstorey, thanks alot for your comments, I really do appreciate it.
Unfortunately, I think the song you are thinking of is "Just the Way I'm Feeling" by Feeder. But trust me, I'm not trying to copy them!
 
Thats the one!!! No, its just that first riff, i wasnt meaning it like that, honest man! Theres only 12 notes in a scale, chances are however you mix them up, it can happen.

Like i said above, i like the song, (its even been put on my iPod, dont you feel privelaged?)

nice work again mate.
 
hey man i like the song....it reminds me of another song.....just the opening riff...lol

You should download this this just to see what i'm talking about if you don't already know it

Dave Matthews Band - Crash into me

....I like your song ...just theres a lot of clipping going on which is pretty painful to the ears ....but fix that up and it sdefinetly a thumbs up from me
 
Hey Lurgan Liar,
I am in fact already a die hard DMB fan, and I love that song to bits. They are a great band, aren't they?
Thanks for your feedback!
 
lurgan liar said:
You should download this this just to see what i'm talking about if you don't already know it

Dave Matthews Band - Crash into me
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I think thats the song it reminded me of actually.. I dont know, im very tired...

I keep listening to this track and its growing on me. I keep listening and thinking if it would benefit of anything else being added to it... but i cant actually think of anything.. I think it sounds good just acoustic and vox. Maybe an acoustic bass guitar? nothing fancy, just something to add a bit of deeper freq in there? That might sound nice.

Anyway, enough of me, im sure you want some other peeps to come in here and give you their opinion! :D

Nice work again mate
 
Lol i know that feeling...
An acoustic bass would be nice, but the money wouldnt be! Perhaps I should start earning some money...
 
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