Death Note (Suicide Letter)....

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The ending was no surprise as the title & build mad it seem inevitable.
The feeling of desperation that many in Haiti must still feel post stalled reconstruction is entirely undersyandable.
Discovering reality is often a cross roads for individuals and HR is populated by people who have compartmentalised their ambition and passion in a way that allows the latter to be expressed creatively and the former to be modified or mollified by achieving different goals.
I like the sparseness of the backing as it gives some primacy to the narrative though the delivery is a little too fast to be able to understand all of the story in the 1st listen.
Oh, I think the title should be one or the other or something less blunt.
 
Sounds pretty good to me.

I feel like it's length is to the song's advantage. You kept it short, and I didn't lose interest before it ended.

The mix sounded good. Nothing stuck out as bad, and nothing seemed too buried to me.
 
good job, nice mix, nice rap.....kinda agree with Ray on the title...one makes the other redundant, just "death note" would work


no nits on it...sound pro bro :)
 
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