Cool Tune,
I never thought I'd say this for hard rock/ metal, but I'm finding the drums too aggresive, or maybe just sampled, is this a drummer with samples or a programmed kit?
- Finding the kick might be more suitable for deathmetal than a hard rock song, and I'd call this a hard rock song, not a metal tune, I'm finding it a little too clicky and thuddy for a hard rock tune, or maybe the bass has to be below the kick to give it some boom
- The snare is super aggressive with heavy early reflections, a lot of slap making it overpower the vocals.
If it were me I'd make the the vocals more aggresive by reducing the aggresiveness of the drums, pull down the snare track a bit or use a less aggresive snare and maybe mildly compress the drum track a little to glue the drums together a bit. In short I guess I'd say I'd make the vocals more of a focus than the drums