Dogman and Ido - thanks for the second listen and feedback - glad the balance is improving
Gorty, cmhansen - yeah, it's a pretty dark guitar, not the one I usually record with but I decided to take the tone as it was without EQing the high end as I dislike the sound of EQ generally
. Next time I'll use the better balanced guitar. Gorty, I didn't use a click on it, but when I was tracking the rhythm gtr I wished I had.
Thanks for the listen.
bigbubba - appreciate the comments about the clarity. You should have heard the alternate takes - not clear at all, heh-heh.
CarcPazu, Incanus - thanks guys… re the impulsive thing in the rhythm, I was trying to convey the some of the feel of the "early Beatles pulsing rhythm gtr style" that some of their earlier stuff (earlier than Day Tripper, really) had... so I'm glad it came across.
Nakatira, Synkrotron, apl, Reel Person - thanks for the listens and kind words.
Tim