jdblessing1970
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Here's one I just wrote (no, no singing included this time.) It's may work better as a poem than as an actual song, but I'd like opinions on it anyway. The first and second stanza might need to be switched, depending on how it reads... Anyhow, here it is.
Daddy’s Girl
©2009 J.D. Blessing
She sits tall in her chair
And gives him a great big grin
As he ties pink ribbons in her hair
And wipes the dribble from her chin.
When she came into his world
It was plain to see
She was born a Daddy’s Girl
And that’s what she’ll always be.
He remembers the fateful day
Of joy combined with grief
A daughter born, but wife passed away
His life changed beyond belief
That she was a special girl
He soon realized
And he’d make sure she’ll always feel
The love shining in his eyes
No boyfriend will take her from his sight
No suitor come to call
But he knows she’ll be alright,
And she won’t care at all.
Some see only her chair with wheels
But that’s not what he sees
He sees only his Daddy’s girl,
This child with special needs.
She sits tall in her chair
And gives him a great big grin
As he ties pink ribbons in her hair
And wipes the dribble from her chin.
When she came into his world
He knew she came to stay
For she was born a Daddy’s Girl
Ten years ago today.
Daddy’s Girl
©2009 J.D. Blessing
She sits tall in her chair
And gives him a great big grin
As he ties pink ribbons in her hair
And wipes the dribble from her chin.
When she came into his world
It was plain to see
She was born a Daddy’s Girl
And that’s what she’ll always be.
He remembers the fateful day
Of joy combined with grief
A daughter born, but wife passed away
His life changed beyond belief
That she was a special girl
He soon realized
And he’d make sure she’ll always feel
The love shining in his eyes
No boyfriend will take her from his sight
No suitor come to call
But he knows she’ll be alright,
And she won’t care at all.
Some see only her chair with wheels
But that’s not what he sees
He sees only his Daddy’s girl,
This child with special needs.
She sits tall in her chair
And gives him a great big grin
As he ties pink ribbons in her hair
And wipes the dribble from her chin.
When she came into his world
He knew she came to stay
For she was born a Daddy’s Girl
Ten years ago today.
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