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Bob's Mods
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Would the honorable members of this board critique my song "The Wanted Man"
at:
http://www.fostex.com/portal/
Search for artist Robert Brown. This is the easiest way to find it.
Let me know what you think of the mix. The song was my attempt at a Steely Dan-ish kinda flavor. Lyrics as follows:
The Wanted Man
In the shadows there are faces there I never see
They look for me
On the way to who knows where I've been to where I go
I only know
In the train yard ahead
A box car is my bed
Now that daylight is gone
[You reap just what you sow]
Many evils that I've done thought buried in the past
Haunt me at last
Now I realize the time has come for me to pay
I'd rather run away
There's a bounty it's said
Placed upon my head
Waiting to be claimed!
{instrumental}
Every city every town's a new identity
They won't capture me
Try to take me in and watch the bullets start to fly
Let me clarify
I'm the wanted man
I'll take a stand
Catch me if you can
[It only goes to show] [You reap just what you sow]
Thanks! Bob the Mod Guy
at:
http://www.fostex.com/portal/
Search for artist Robert Brown. This is the easiest way to find it.
Let me know what you think of the mix. The song was my attempt at a Steely Dan-ish kinda flavor. Lyrics as follows:
The Wanted Man
In the shadows there are faces there I never see
They look for me
On the way to who knows where I've been to where I go
I only know
In the train yard ahead
A box car is my bed
Now that daylight is gone
[You reap just what you sow]
Many evils that I've done thought buried in the past
Haunt me at last
Now I realize the time has come for me to pay
I'd rather run away
There's a bounty it's said
Placed upon my head
Waiting to be claimed!
{instrumental}
Every city every town's a new identity
They won't capture me
Try to take me in and watch the bullets start to fly
Let me clarify
I'm the wanted man
I'll take a stand
Catch me if you can
[It only goes to show] [You reap just what you sow]
Thanks! Bob the Mod Guy