Couple beats that need some critique

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Click Music on the right hand side, and check the 3 top beats. Tell me what you think about each one, what you would change on each one. I critique other peoples beats, but I can't seem to do my own yet.

What do you think?

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EDIT: Don't mind the ending to "Memory", the snare thing, that was accidental, not intentional.
 
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&& Still no critique? They must really rot! Ha!, C'mon guys. :)

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"Remember" needs a nice bassline to help that. Some change ups are needed too. It gets basic after a while, but its nice progress with your work.

On "Memory", take those snares out completely. They're killing the track. Maybe replace them with claps or snaps. The instruments in the main melody sounds too much like standard MIDI. I would change those so they don't sound so computer generated.

"Furious" needs a deeper bassline. Add some strings and this might help push it to that next level.

Fiev
 
Fieva said:
"Remember" needs a nice bassline to help that. Some change ups are needed too. It gets basic after a while, but its nice progress with your work.

On "Memory", take those snares out completely. They're killing the track. Maybe replace them with claps or snaps. The instruments in the main melody sounds too much like standard MIDI. I would change those so they don't sound so computer generated.

"Furious" needs a deeper bassline. Add some strings and this might help push it to that next level.

Fiev

Thanks for lookin' out Fiev. Always appreciate your input, I'll change all that and let you know when the changes have taken effect, I deleted my Vista install, because it sucked, so I'm going to throw on XP and start fresh, ya dig? I'll definitely work up on those though.

From where I was at when I started, have I progressed a whole lot? :D

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Thanks for lookin' out Fiev. Always appreciate your input, I'll change all that and let you know when the changes have taken effect, I deleted my Vista install, because it sucked, so I'm going to throw on XP and start fresh, ya dig? I'll definitely work up on those though.

From where I was at when I started, have I progressed a whole lot? :D

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It's getting a lot better than it was at first....now we're going to have to fine tune your sound. First things first, go look for soundfonts that will add to your FL and give you more versatility outside of the box. Trust me it will help your sound out tremendously.
 
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I deleted my Vista install, because it sucked, so I'm going to throw on XP and start fresh
good idea. Vista? what's that? :rolleyes: wait a year before going to that bug, i mean OS.
 
BillyBo said:
good idea. Vista? what's that? :rolleyes: wait a year before going to that bug, i mean OS.

Heh, yeah.. I use Linux fulltime, usually. But FL7 doesn't work in Wine on Linux >.> :)

So I have to have some sort of winblows os on here :D

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