cool, very catchy. The vox track grew on me. Some of the guitar tones Id have done different. I like the envelope filter or wha stuff, whatever it is. Neil Schon lead guitar tone, late 70's journey, I love that stuff. Overall, 90 out of 100.
I like the tune, but it doesn't sound like something I would listen to again. I'll have to agree with others that the vocals are not what makes the track shine. Nice soloing at the end, though. IMO, I would rework the vocals with more emotion and change up the melody.
It's not a bad song though. I can tell a lot of work and thought went into it. Nice job.
That's why I post my stuff here. I am interested in the breadth of the response, no matter what comes. I've been playing and writing music for many years, so I don't rush to change my songs based upon the latest post. I am, however, looking for the one or two nuggets that I know are worth using.