sorry to be so critical...
FWIW...
the playing seems fine, but it sounds like an AM radio.
there's no width or space around the drums... absolutely no ambience...
and if you bring the cymbals forward, I think they may be too brittle... work to do there...
the kick tone seemd Ok but I was too distracted by the rest of the kit's tone...
I like the snare, but I it needs a bit of body...
double the guitar and see what happens...