Solved Collaboration?

[danny.guitar]

Someone was going to lay down some vocals to this but it didn't work out. So I was wondering if anyone wanted to add something to this raw acoustic track that has nothing else in it.

I was kinda making it up as I went. If you do, feel free to add anything, drums, harmonica, piano, keyboards, strings, lead guitar, vocals, anything.

If you want I'll upload the WAV. Or you can just record over the MP3 and send me an MP3/WAV of your tracks.

Anyway, here's the track.

 

[rayc]

Really nice Danny.
I don't have the chops to play along however I can offer these lyrics which seem to fit. They're maudlin, as are most of mine, but the progression is melancholy.
Oh, I don't mind rejection.

Games of Love (No-one Can Play)
Bottled tears of brothel queens,
Dime store love in magazines,
Pornographic valentines,
In games of love no-one can play.

Bleeding Jester’s morbid mirth,
Death, triumphant at each birth,
Borrowed words of little worth,
In games of love no-one can play.

Newborn, still born, bleeding heart,
Morning, evening’s dying art,
In all these we play no part,
In games of love no-one can play…
cochrane

 

[Dogman]

Good sound on the guitar. Should turn out to be cool when finished. If I think of anything I can add, I'll try.

 

[danny.guitar]

Really nice Danny.
I don't have the chops to play along however I can offer these lyrics which seem to fit. They're maudlin, as are most of mine, but the progression is melancholy.
Oh, I don't mind rejection.

Games of Love (No-one Can Play)
Bottled tears of brothel queens,
Dime store love in magazines,
Pornographic valentines,
In games of love no-one can play.

Bleeding Jester’s morbid mirth,
Death, triumphant at each birth,
Borrowed words of little worth,
In games of love no-one can play.

Newborn, still born, bleeding heart,
Morning, evening’s dying art,
In all these we play no part,
In games of love no-one can play…
cochrane

Listened to it again while reading the lyrics. I think they're cool. Any chance you'd (or anyone else) wanna add some vocals to it?

Good sound on the guitar. Should turn out to be cool when finished. If I think of anything I can add, I'll try.

Cool, Dogman. Maybe add some light drums in the background? If you can keep up with my sloppy, off-beat playing.

 

[Polska_77]

really nice guitar tones. The lyrics rayC posted do fit pretty well. I'd like to hear them sung Shane mcGowan style.

 

[rayc]

Danny,
My wife won't even allow me to hum around the house - that's th quality of my err voice.
I offer you use of the lyric - p'haps you can find your own voice or another more able that I.

 

[danny.guitar]

really nice guitar tones. The lyrics rayC posted do fit pretty well. I'd like to hear them sung Shane mcGowan style.

Thanks Polska.

Danny,
My wife won't even allow me to hum around the house - that's th quality of my err voice.
I offer you use of the lyric - p'haps you can find your own voice or another more able that I.

I (think) I've heard you sing before on one of your songs (Wah Wow?). Sounded good to me.

But that's cool if you can't/don't want to. Not sure if I'll find a singer. Only know one vocalist. Either way that was real cool of you to take the time to listen and even write lyrics for it. Really appreciated.

 

[rayc]

Danny,
The singing is by my co writer Terry.
'twas a pleasure.