Coños what do you think of my lyrics...

[veganpower!]

I dont wana be alone

When I am 30

Like The Who said

I wana die young!

Like Post Modern Rock

I'm a complete loss

My words lost sense when I spoke them

My hair isn't dyed no not all the time

I'm no Image

Np pseudo mock talk mind

I dont reject joys of stupid waste

Nor do I preach nihilistic hate



All I am is ALL I see

Spiky punk long hair

aint how I define my self

A sold out market a corporate scheme

I reject it!

I dislove to dislike

What's sheer or in style

I defy my lies I speak in 4th person

A person I know whom met me said

"The wisest words haven't been spoken

Best watch your words they could get stolen"

 

[fat_fleet]

too self-referency. try to avoid using the word "I".

 

[veganpower!]

Thanks!!!!