Check this song out!

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Interesting blend of distorted and clean guitars on the backups. The distortion seems to be building up a bit and affecting it a bit - maybe more clean and less dirty....

The vocals are a bit uneven in volume (and a bit pitchy), could use some levelling out using faders when mixing or maybe compression. Vocals are usually the focal point on songs so I would concentrate on those.

Now you have a basic cut recorded, spend a few days listening to it, and take note of the good parts - that's what you want to focus on. Then sit down and record this again and you should have an even better version.

Do you have this on multi-track? Maybe retrack the various parts along with the original as a reference. Keep the best takes and build your next version.

I like this. it has lots of potential, it just needs some polish.....

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I like the tempo. slower than you'd expect. very steady. I like the song, but it has a lot that needs to be worked out. Needs better vocals, and cut the lows and maybe turn up the highs a little vocals.
 
I have updated the track a little bit, I tried cutting the low's a bit and think it does sound better, I have even added a little guitar work at the end, the singing is still missing something, but please give it another listen!!!!

thanks
 
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