Check this one out...

[vicevursa]

I am ready for your criticism. The song that I would like you all to lend an ear to is called "SEU". I appreciate any advice on the mix the tune or whatever.... It's the second song on the page. Thanks in advance...

www.mp3.com/usualsuspect

 

[Buck62]

vice...

The song itself is very good!
Kind of a slow-Jazzy feel to it.

Well played throughout, too.
(except for that note you missed at 3:55... but, I'm nit-picking here)

As for the mix....
Definitely bring the drums down a bit.
I would also add some off-beats or variance at some point in the song... that would eliminate any feel of monotony.

Nice work, dude!

Buck

 

[vicevursa]

Buck, thanks for the listen. I'm going take another look and see what I can do... I'll rework the drums. I wasn't too sure if they were too much or not...

Thanks again, Buck!