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REEK BROCK
MR. LAST WORD
Welcome to the forum.This is strickly my opinion and I know I'm no expert.RB89 needs some more added to it and the drums need to hit harder.Its tight just need some more seasoning.RB68 is hot man nothin I can say that I dont like off hand.RB64 just aint my thing.RB59 is tight too just needs more to it.All in all I like your style.Keep it up.
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BillyBo
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i wish i had some critiquing words for you. i don't right now, sorry. i like all but the first track.. the drums are too far in the back. bring them forward some. the melody overrides the beat.
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daddijonez
New member
wsup
None of the beats are my stlye but I can that you have skills cuz they are all pretty good compositions but me being an M.C. nothing came to mind during any of them but like i said not my style. Good work anyway!
None of the beats are my stlye but I can that you have skills cuz they are all pretty good compositions but me being an M.C. nothing came to mind during any of them but like i said not my style. Good work anyway!
Fieva
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I agree with bringing the drums out in RB89. You could also bring those hi hats up too to help them be more crisp. I would also suggest some change ups.
RB68, I like it, but it needs a little work. It seemed like it was leading up to something in the intro but then the record player just messed up and looped itself. Has potential to be straight heat but it's lacking just a little.
RB64, that hit me. I like that. Kind of has a Santana feel, but it needs more because the drums aren't mixing well with that melody. Maybe adding another instrument melody combo might help that. Get it fuller, but not too full
RB59, that's money right there. Add in a woodblock pattern and biring up that snare for a sure hit. Everything that I commented on the other beats you did on this one so I know you've got it in you (change ups, layering, better mixing with it). Do more stuff like this and you're killin' em. Guaranteed.
Welcome to the forum and stay up,
Fiev
RB68, I like it, but it needs a little work. It seemed like it was leading up to something in the intro but then the record player just messed up and looped itself. Has potential to be straight heat but it's lacking just a little.
RB64, that hit me. I like that. Kind of has a Santana feel, but it needs more because the drums aren't mixing well with that melody. Maybe adding another instrument melody combo might help that. Get it fuller, but not too full
RB59, that's money right there. Add in a woodblock pattern and biring up that snare for a sure hit. Everything that I commented on the other beats you did on this one so I know you've got it in you (change ups, layering, better mixing with it). Do more stuff like this and you're killin' em. Guaranteed.
Welcome to the forum and stay up,
Fiev
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biglou2n
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wow guys thanks for all the feedback.. i will take everything into consideration.. much appreciated !!! 