Check out my new song

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Damn! Haha I was a little drunk when I posted and I forgot to say which song.

It the "I wonder" song
 
MHB,
Something doesn't sound right with the drums on the intro - is it the hi hat? your recording skills are on the improve.
Mix wise his is OK. Needs some real bottom end though - probably from the drums.
The structure of the song seems to be A B C B C etc which is ok but you really need a melody to pull it together so that it doesn't just seem like linked riffs.
 
The tone on the guitars is good. The playing is ok and the basic structure is solid. Like RayC said it could use some vocals and bass to round it off a bit. I did find that (on headphones) the two guitars were struggling against each other. I wonder if it wouldn't help to record two takes of each guitar and work on panning the four tracks a bit. They seem diametrically opposed at times.

:) :D :) :D
 
ido1957 said:
The tone on the guitars is good. The playing is ok and the basic structure is solid. Like RayC said it could use some vocals and bass to round it off a bit. I did find that (on headphones) the two guitars were struggling against each other. I wonder if it wouldn't help to record two takes of each guitar and work on panning the four tracks a bit. They seem diametrically opposed at times.

:) :D :) :D
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Yea, I was playing the lead guitar but my friend kept messing up with his part. I just left it like that so he wouldn't feel bad. I'll add bass and vocals today.
 
The overall mix for what you've got so far sounds pretty good. I'll go against the grain though,..as I dont care too much for the guitar tone. Maybe just 'cause there's no bass,..not sure. I'll check it out after you get the bass and vocs in. The fake drums didnt bother me too much as it does most of the time.
Sounds good so far overall.

Take 'er easy,..
Calwood
 
Sounds ok...good little technique with the L&R guitars playing slightly differently.

What's your setup?
 
I had a Randall RG75 with an sm57 and a VTB tube preamp. All that went to a Lexicon Lambda recording interface. I hadly had any bass. I had plenty of mids and treble and very little gain. Its several different tones.
 
Sounds allright, But you might have to change quite a bit if you get vox and bass in there.

The guitars sound kinda full throttle wich is ok when there is no bass and vox, so nice mix so far.

The song sound kinda blink new-punk to me, not as metal as I thought you`d go :D
 
Nakatira said:
Sounds allright, But you might have to change quite a bit if you get vox and bass in there.

The guitars sound kinda full throttle wich is ok when there is no bass and vox, so nice mix so far.

The song sound kinda blink new-punk to me, not as metal as I thought you`d go :D
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Actually I really don't like this song haha. My friend likes punk and all that emo shit so I made it for him.
 
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