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[TelePaul]

Hey guys, I was all set to do this cover of U2's 'All I Want Is You'. But the singer bailed...and the back-up bailed....so i stepped up; pretty much ruined a nice arrangement with piss poor vocals! Oh well.

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[rayc]

It sounds as if the reverb is sending your voice through the sanre of a drum & recording the rattle. It's a bit distracting - like essing that's gone feral.
Your voice isn't half so bad as most performers trying to do BOWNO.
Can you clear up that effect & post a dry version? I reckon it'd be much better.

 

[TelePaul]

will do man, ill post later tonight. Thanks for the feedback, ill tone down the verb.