I really liked the track for the most part. I only have two small criticisms. One is that the beat seems like it loops slightly quick and one of the snares hits just a little early. Edit a few of your notes and it will be great. Do you use the ASR-X? The beat sounds like it was sequenced on it Also, this is only my opinion, but the little sample that you hit five or six times in the second bar of the main loop just doesn't hit me right. It sounds slightly cheesy and too quick. That's not a dis, believe me, I have went back over older tracks of mine and hear elements that sound real whack to me. It is very important to leave a track alone for a week or so then play it again to see if it immediately hits you. I'll tell you what I did like, though. I loved that deep bass breakdown and light rising sample that accompanies it. That felt real good to the senses. I also dug the way you ended the song. If you tighten up the track a bit you'll have a real solid hip-hop effort.