Big Jinx
Artist and Producer
Finished it and wanted some feedback on some of the joints. Thanks in advance....
THE JESSE JAMES STREET DEMO
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THE JESSE JAMES STREET DEMO
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bigwillz24
New member
I feel ridah playa...
dnkygirl
M42 Entertainment
I like:
Give it up
Ridah
These are hot tracks!!!
Demi
Give it up
Ridah
These are hot tracks!!!
Demi
Fieva
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What You Want - beat and vocals could use a little lift to hit your ass. That first verse was just a little basic.
Give It Up - I like how he switched up his flow to this...beat is on pointl I could bounce some bed springs to this. Only suggestion I would make is the singer on the hook has too deep of a voice (sounds just a bit manly and it scares me). I would add a vocal with lighter pitch to throw it off a little bit or redo it all together.
Ridah - Nice...I would suggest making an edited version. This one could get radio play and could be a nice single for him. But first add a little more to the hook so it stands out more than the verses. Should just be a matter of adding vocals and delaying them and panning rights and lefts.
Hey Ladies - Hook is weak. Verses are straight though. Get a female in there somewhere...preferably helping out on the hook or the bridge (or both). A song like this with no female in it at all makes it sound like a rapper just spittin' weak game tryin to avoid goin home alone.
Getcha - Has a nice weird kind of Three Six effect at the beginning with the hook. Then he switches it up with the verse. Took me about 4 secs to get used to it and then I rode along with it...could be another single if you edit this.
Like See - I like the concept of this one...brighten up those vocals a little bit. This could be another one...I like this one. Kinda has a Lil' O Bag Back flow goin on there.
Stand Up - Something about that hook sounds basic as hell...might lose people before they get into the verses. Lyrically the verse needs work like around the first half of it. Beat needs to be a little more "in your face" for a song like this...try adding some synths to it to give it more punch.
Ya friendly neighbahood Fiev!
Give It Up - I like how he switched up his flow to this...beat is on pointl I could bounce some bed springs to this. Only suggestion I would make is the singer on the hook has too deep of a voice (sounds just a bit manly and it scares me). I would add a vocal with lighter pitch to throw it off a little bit or redo it all together.
Ridah - Nice...I would suggest making an edited version. This one could get radio play and could be a nice single for him. But first add a little more to the hook so it stands out more than the verses. Should just be a matter of adding vocals and delaying them and panning rights and lefts.
Hey Ladies - Hook is weak. Verses are straight though. Get a female in there somewhere...preferably helping out on the hook or the bridge (or both). A song like this with no female in it at all makes it sound like a rapper just spittin' weak game tryin to avoid goin home alone.
Getcha - Has a nice weird kind of Three Six effect at the beginning with the hook. Then he switches it up with the verse. Took me about 4 secs to get used to it and then I rode along with it...could be another single if you edit this.
Like See - I like the concept of this one...brighten up those vocals a little bit. This could be another one...I like this one. Kinda has a Lil' O Bag Back flow goin on there.
Stand Up - Something about that hook sounds basic as hell...might lose people before they get into the verses. Lyrically the verse needs work like around the first half of it. Beat needs to be a little more "in your face" for a song like this...try adding some synths to it to give it more punch.
Ya friendly neighbahood Fiev!
Big Jinx
Artist and Producer
LOL, Thanks for the in depth Fieva and I'd love to do all the above, but he's currently doing 6 to 8...Demo was done about a week before he got locked up. Oh well, at least I got paid....Oh, and the singer on "Give it Up" is a guy....lol
gullyjewelz
New member
Got Damm - Good Shit - How In The Hell . . . All This Jail Shit!!! Damm Sosad!
Fieva
facebook.com/fieva
LOL @ singer being a guy HAHAHAHAHA.
Damn about the locked up shit...sound like dude could have worked towardss somethin
Damn about the locked up shit...sound like dude could have worked towardss somethin
bknot1
Hustle Magic!! We Got It.
Jinx.. this is a nice EP.. nice work on the production side.. i do feel Ridah.. can be a radio play song for him.. but since he is doin time.. other thing you can do with it is edit (reverse, mute or sound effect) some of the words..
but i think we would have promise over there on the left coast..
keep up the good work fam
but i think we would have promise over there on the left coast..
keep up the good work fam