Burning June: Uploaded new mix

[LeeRosario]

http://soundclick.com/share?songid=6195062

I suppose it's final for the sake of an approaching deadline. I suppose more for demo purposes, so I guess I'm looking for a thumbs up/down. Anywho, I always appreciate some good input.

Lee


ps.

I'll be comming out with a new mix like this about every night in the next week.

 

[dreamer7]

Hi Lee,
A bit too conventional for my personal tastes these days, but then I listen to some pretty weird stuff sometimes (well, and some fairly normal stuff too actually!). Very well written and the production etc sounded great to me. Amazing for a demo if that's what it really is.
dreamer7
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[monkeymanx]

Sounds like you are using a pitch correcter on your vocal tracks and it seems to abrupt. I really noticed it around 0:55. Maybe it isn't but it sure sounds like it.

The cymbals don't seem to have enough crispness to them, which may be due to the soundclick mp3 encoding. I'm just used to hearing more air there.

Overall sounds pretty dang good. Nice catchy tune too.

 

[rayc]

1st verse
"...would of kissed..."
should be either
would've or would have.
Not that anyone will care or notice except a droob like me.
THe vocals are a little more nasal than usual - not a bad thing - distinctive and tags the performer a bit like the slightly flat singing of the 80's did for Bronski beat etc.
Excellent recording & mix.