Blow-Up Doll - A Greg_L original stupid love song

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100 PSI would be one tough lady!

That's a good point! That is one pressurized sex toy!

I actually like the guitar tone at the beginning.

My one big nit is that the vocals are pretty pitchy on the first line. I know you've admitted before to not having the strongest singing voice, but I think you've got a better delivery than that in you.

So this one isn't on my copy of El Bastardo Azul. Japanese import bonus track? :D
 
This is really sweet. So romantic and vulnerable.
Cool tune though. Radio slick as usual, nice full guitars. I can't find a crack in it. I like the melodic lines that come in around 2.30.

Is there some kind of shaker going off in the first 30 seconds? I could swear there's something besides the ride bell going off, but it could be the soundcloud player mucking with my ears.
Thanks man. There's a very cheap tambourine that plays through certain parts of the song, and soundcloud's player tends to butcher it, and anything else jangly like my hats and cymbals.

Managed to grab a listen to around half of this the other night before I was called away to some domestic duty or other. Hope to give the full thing a listen soon. Sounds great - usual immature subject matter that I like. I like the octave not quite chords in the intro - I've always liked that sound.

Listening on headphones I found the picked guitars in the quiter section very up close, then the heavier rhythm guitars were more distant sounding - was that deliberate? Great transition into the heavier half of the verse.

100 PSI would be one tough lady!
Thanks dude. There was no deliberate dynamic level finagling with the rhythm tracks. Each rhythm track is just played straight through with no changes to anything. The quieter picking parts are just picking parts. One side is just palm muting and the other is light picking the chord notes. I don't know what that's called. Arpeggio or something? I'm not too fancy with the actual terms of things. I don't know why they'd seem more up front than the rest of the rhythm track though. Maybe because most of the other stuff drops out of the mix at those spots? Maybe the master bus compression squashing less stuff down? I really don't know. I didn't notice it myself. I just let things ride for the most part.

That's a good point! That is one pressurized sex toy!

I actually like the guitar tone at the beginning.

My one big nit is that the vocals are pretty pitchy on the first line. I know you've admitted before to not having the strongest singing voice, but I think you've got a better delivery than that in you.

So this one isn't on my copy of El Bastardo Azul. Japanese import bonus track? :D
Ha, no, El Bastardo is way put to bed. This one might make it onto the next album, or the one after. I've got enough songs piled up to go through them and put a new album together. Maybe a double album. :D

Thanks for listening. I know the "soft" vocals are not very good. I knew they'd be rough before I even tracked them. I'm mostly okay with it because that's just how it is and it's somewhat endearing to me. Most people might hear it and think "man Greg sucks" and I'm okay with that. I hear it and laugh at myself and I think that's fun. I really don't know if I can do it better. I will probably give it a more earnest try though before this song ever sees the light of day again.

100 PSI is a lot of pressure for a blow up doll I'm sure. I mean, car tires are around 30-35 psi, and they're pretty tight. Lol. My thinking was....this blow up doll is 5 ft tall, and a 5 ft tall woman would weigh around 100 pounds or so, so I'll make her 100 psi. :D
 
blow up dolls are very understanding ..... they won't fuss at you if you get yet another light bulb for your light bulb collection!
:D
 
Also in the plus column for blow up dolls as partners of course is that they can come on holiday with you as hand luggage...

This sounds great. Harmonies and main vocal sound damn good and the ride part definitely adds something.

Only thing I noticed was that the right panned guitar is maybe a little boomy/flubby in that verse between 0.30-0.43. I dunno if others hear it or not?
 
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Also in the plus column for blow up dolls as partners of course is that they can come on holiday with you as hand luggage...

This sounds great. Harmonies and main vocal sound damn good and the ride part definitely adds something.

Only thing I noticed was that the right panned guitar is maybe a little boomy/flubby in that verse between 0.30-0.43. I dunno if others hear it or not?
Thanks dude. I don't really hear that part as flubby, but I am pretty used to it. I'll give it a closer listen. Thanks again. :)
 
Holy crap, this sounds fantastic. Guitars and drums both sound spot on to me. I like the kick and tom sounds on the drums, they come through very well. Guitars are nice and present, and whatever you did to "louden" the mix is transparent to my ears. The mix is nice, loud, aggressive, and I don't hear any discernible pumping or compression artifacts. I'd say well done. It's quintessential rock and roll.

I agree with the above about the pitchy first line...if it was in the middle of the song I wouldn't have noticed. But as a first impression in the first moments of the song, it stuck out. Otherwise the vocals are great. A little buried here and there, but as a guitarist it doesn't bother me for vocals to compete with guitars. My vocalist wife would complain though.
 
Holy crap, this sounds fantastic. Guitars and drums both sound spot on to me. I like the kick and tom sounds on the drums, they come through very well. Guitars are nice and present, and whatever you did to "louden" the mix is transparent to my ears. The mix is nice, loud, aggressive, and I don't hear any discernible pumping or compression artifacts. I'd say well done. It's quintessential rock and roll.

I agree with the above about the pitchy first line...if it was in the middle of the song I wouldn't have noticed. But as a first impression in the first moments of the song, it stuck out. Otherwise the vocals are great. A little buried here and there, but as a guitarist it doesn't bother me for vocals to compete with guitars. My vocalist wife would complain though.

Okay thanks man. That's another vote on pitchy. I guess I'll have to retrack that part. Thanks again.
 
Great stuff. The vocals reminded me of the Ramones. Not that you sounded like them,,,,,,great song.

Have you ever listed to this?????

 
Relistening-
The melody & vocal delivery are influenced by Joey Ramone - hardly surprising but clearly so.
Really cool when the 2nd guitar comes in on the solo - a touch of class.
Fun stuff.
 
Fucking awesome. You consistently get a balanced, clear mix out of your setup, you are the master of your domain. I love this sound and I laughed loud several times, particularly on the "Blow, wo-oo-wo" parts in the chorus, classic.
 
Great stuff. The vocals reminded me of the Ramones. Not that you sounded like them,,,,,,great song.

Have you ever listed to this?????


Thanks. I used to listen to a little TSOL in my younger days, not so much now.

Relistening-
The melody & vocal delivery are influenced by Joey Ramone - hardly surprising but clearly so.
Really cool when the 2nd guitar comes in on the solo - a touch of class.
Fun stuff.
Thanks Ray. I don't ever try to sound like the Ramones, but I'm not surprised if it comes out that way sometimes.

Fucking awesome. You consistently get a balanced, clear mix out of your setup, you are the master of your domain. I love this sound and I laughed loud several times, particularly on the "Blow, wo-oo-wo" parts in the chorus, classic.

Thanks dude. I really like the "blow-whoa-whoa" part too, but I didn't think anyone else would. :o
 
Hey Greg

This sounds great as usual. I'm forced to listen on my tracking phones right now, so maybe not in the best position to analyze a mix.

The guitars sound great though. I know that's been a big focus for you lately. The panning on them is pretty extreme in phones. It sounds cool, but the middle is maybe a tad empty as a result. Love the doubled lead riff with the fast tremolo. Drums and bass sound solid. BGVs are great too.

The only thing that threw me a bit was the vocals at the very beginning. That bit was more, uh...like traditional singing than I guess I'm used to hearing from you, which is great, but the first line or two seemed kind of pitchy (flat?) maybe? It settled down before you got to the more familar belting it out style that you switch to @ :44. I don't even think it would stand out so much if it wasn't right out of the gate like that, you know? I could be wrong though.

I didn't get to read the other comments, so I apologize if any of this is redundant or whatever. Nice work as always dood :).
 
Hey Greg

This sounds great as usual. I'm forced to listen on my tracking phones right now, so maybe not in the best position to analyze a mix.

The guitars sound great though. I know that's been a big focus for you lately. The panning on them is pretty extreme in phones. It sounds cool, but the middle is maybe a tad empty as a result. Love the doubled lead riff with the fast tremolo. Drums and bass sound solid. BGVs are great too.

The only thing that threw me a bit was the vocals at the very beginning. That bit was more, uh...like traditional singing than I guess I'm used to hearing from you, which is great, but the first line or two seemed kind of pitchy (flat?) maybe? It settled down before you got to the more familar belting it out style that you switch to @ :44. I don't even think it would stand out so much if it wasn't right out of the gate like that, you know? I could be wrong though.

I didn't get to read the other comments, so I apologize if any of this is redundant or whatever. Nice work as always dood :).

Thanks a lot heat. You're like the third person I think to mention those vocals, so I guess I'll be redoing that part.
 
I think I know your guitar rig relatively well from your posts in the guitar forum, but what do you use for the rest of your guitar recording chain? Like mic, preamp, EQ during mixing, etc? It's killing me that you can get such a searing, clear distorted tone that sounds so lively in the mix. My own electric guitar parts are muddy and lacking that "shimmer" (almost total lack of high end). I figure I could dig through the hundreds of pages of the tone thread to find out, but by the time I'd be 1/2 way through I bet you could rattle it off the top of your head!

Also, what did you use as a compressor/limiter on the overall mix? I like the transparency of it, and how loud the mix is without being pumpy.
 
I listen to your stuff each time you post. It's nothing I would ever listen to but I check it out and every time the mixes sound great. It always turns into "I'm listening to a song" instead of "I'm trying to find some problem".

Great work as always man
 
I think I know your guitar rig relatively well from your posts in the guitar forum, but what do you use for the rest of your guitar recording chain? Like mic, preamp, EQ during mixing, etc? It's killing me that you can get such a searing, clear distorted tone that sounds so lively in the mix. My own electric guitar parts are muddy and lacking that "shimmer" (almost total lack of high end). I figure I could dig through the hundreds of pages of the tone thread to find out, but by the time I'd be 1/2 way through I bet you could rattle it off the top of your head!
Thanks man. I'm flattered that you think my shit sounds good enough to ask about it. Unfortunately I have no cool secrets to tell. I wish there was some neat trick I could share, but honestly, these are just as they were recorded. Seriously. Every guitar track on this thing is completely untouched in the mix. This is just as they came through the mics and I left them alone. No EQ. No compression. No reverb. Nothing. What I think it is....I'm extremely blessed and fortunate to be using really nice guitars and amps and cabs and speakers.....and I can play them loud. It obviously matters, because, and I'm not tooting my own horn here, but if you think these sound good, that's why. Good equipment, mic it right, play it loud, leave it the fuck alone.

Having said that, the one thing I've been doing lately that I think is really working for me is my mic spacing. I'm putting a 57 on axis, slightly off-center, right on the grill. I'm also putting an i5 on axis, on the grill, way out on the edge of the same speaker. Do a few little test clips, get them in phase, and bam - sweet ass blend. So all of these tracks are two mics per speaker, the 57 close to center, and the i5 on the edge - regardless of speaker. And all of the tracks are a full blend of each. 100/100. All guitar tracks were done with this mic method, and Vintage 30s and Greenbacks were the speakers used. But first, I must stress that I think it's very important to be able to get a good track with one mic first.

Also, what did you use as a compressor/limiter on the overall mix? I like the transparency of it, and how loud the mix is without being pumpy.
This is an area where I can share a "trick" that maybe not too many people do. I really don't know. The first, I think most important thing I do is to not kill whatever dynamics I have in the mix phase with overuse of compressors on the raw tracks. I really don't hardly do shit to my mixes. My songs and style doesn't naturally have a lot of dynamics anyway, so it all works out. So what I do is make my raw mix the best I can, bounce it out with a lot of headroom, and bring that stereo mix back in to a blank project. This is where I think it gets awesome.....I put a bunch - like 6 or 7 or more - of good limiter plugs on the master bus. Why a bunch? I'll tell you. I set each one to just tickle the mix more and more as it goes down the line instead of one limiter bashing the mix to death. I don't know how or why it just works better, but it does for me. I get a more transparent loudness this way. Try it for yourself and see how it goes.

I listen to your stuff each time you post. It's nothing I would ever listen to but I check it out and every time the mixes sound great. It always turns into "I'm listening to a song" instead of "I'm trying to find some problem".

Great work as always man

Awesome, thank you very much. I hear mixes like that too in here and I really enjoy it when it's sounding good enough to just get kind of lost in it. Thanks again. :)
 
Cool, thanks Greg. Yes, your guitar tracks sound like I'm sitting in front of the cabinet...they're just very present and large-as-life. And with 100W Marshall heads pushing a couple of 4x12s, life is pretty damn large!

Definitely good advice, and for the most part I'm pretty close to following those same techniques. I think I have the rig and recording setup to produce much better electric guitar tracks than I'm getting, and I don't think it's really a different world of equipment than you're using. You've definitely got more wattage and speaker surface area, and a lot more practice at playing and recording :D

So can I ask about your tracking room? For instance, where in your room do you put your cabs? Spaced from the wall, or smooshed up against the wall? Far from a corner, or crammed in a corner like they're in time-out? Any bass trapping or other treatments? I'm starting to think that the painfully shitty acoustics in my tracking area are a big factor...but with a close-mic would it really make the difference between my dull and lifeless guitar tracks and your sparkling, true-to-life tracks?

Sorry to ask all this in your mix thread. Hopefully it's on-topic enough that when our future alien overlords read this thread, they too will know how you committed the full fidelity of your guitar rig to this recording.
 
Amazing stuff as usual, Greg. Keep 'em coming. It is inspiring to say the least.

I remember reading a while back that what really matters is the source, the sound that is recorded, and I didn't really comprehend that before listening to your tunes. So thanks for that.
 
Cool, thanks Greg. Yes, your guitar tracks sound like I'm sitting in front of the cabinet...they're just very present and large-as-life. And with 100W Marshall heads pushing a couple of 4x12s, life is pretty damn large!

Definitely good advice, and for the most part I'm pretty close to following those same techniques. I think I have the rig and recording setup to produce much better electric guitar tracks than I'm getting, and I don't think it's really a different world of equipment than you're using. You've definitely got more wattage and speaker surface area, and a lot more practice at playing and recording :D

So can I ask about your tracking room? For instance, where in your room do you put your cabs? Spaced from the wall, or smooshed up against the wall? Far from a corner, or crammed in a corner like they're in time-out? Any bass trapping or other treatments? I'm starting to think that the painfully shitty acoustics in my tracking area are a big factor...but with a close-mic would it really make the difference between my dull and lifeless guitar tracks and your sparkling, true-to-life tracks?

Sorry to ask all this in your mix thread. Hopefully it's on-topic enough that when our future alien overlords read this thread, they too will know how you committed the full fidelity of your guitar rig to this recording.

Lol. It's no problem dude.

My tracking room is not really a tracking room at all. I have to track and mix in the same space, so this room is setup to be more of a mixing room than a lively tracking room. Bass traps, clouds, reflection point diffusers, the works. It's dead in here. That doesn't matter to me because I don't like a bunch of "room" anyway. Id rather add room with my reverb impulses. I got some nice ones and they sound better than this damn room sounds. I think this is a good listening/mixing room though. Anyway, my cabs are jammed up against a long wall facing outwards into the room. Why? Because that's where they'll fit and this shit is so loud that it doesn't really matter anyway when you put a mic right up on the grill. I don't use distant or room mics. There's also a drum kit in here. The drum kit booms and the snare buzzes and the cymbals ring when I'm tracking guitars, so I throw a blanket over the whole thing. And occasionally I roll a cab out into the front entryway of my house which is just outside this room. I have no reason for doing that, just sometimes I don't feel like having my head blown off. If I ever wanted a big room sound I'd use room mics out there. I have tracked drums out there and it sounded awesome. But for guitars I usually like them very dry, maybe a little tiny delay or reverb on lead lines. Or stupid crazy spring reverb for surfy stuff.

But let's talk about your "dull and lifeless" guitar tracks. Maybe we can figure it out. I'm glad to help in any way if I can. Or we can take it down to the tone thread for more opinions. First off, what guitar/amp/cab/speakers/mics are you using....and what do you actually want to sound like?
 
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