"Blame"

[K-dub]

The harmonies are cool. I liked that a lot. Vocals sounds great in general. Drums sound good. Bass sounds good.

I liked the guitar on the left side. Too much reverb on it for my tastes.

Some pops on the right side between :44 and :48. A couple more around 1:30.

So where the hell were you when I originally released this?

Your punishment is that you're going to have to download my latest album and tell me what you think about it. I sent the link to Chris (above), but if you're of a mind? You can go here to download the file.

The songfiles are professionally mastered ... and I'd like to hear from you whether he heard the pops.

 

[TripleM]

OK I'll give it a go.

 

[Rod Norman]

First, the bridge has what sounds like a diminished chord at the end. A producer would probably suggest not straying so far from the musical theme you've built. People like to be able to sing along without having to search for the right notes. Second, you have a cute little Rhumba ditty here. The conflict is in the title and words versus the style. Not a big deal but shouldn't you be toughing this theme up a bit instead of sounding like you don't care? It conflicts with the intent in the words. Change the word "blame" to "love" and the whole song sounds right. Write another song with more intensity and put the blame thing in there. Good Luck,
Rod Norman