you have a light touch on the drums....but they came out sounding pretty good. The guitars however just don't match with the sound. I can really imagine the drum set in front of me...but the guitars sound too direct. I think they need to be panned further out too.
the drum intro is interesting, but I think you need something in addition to your "marching" drums there. Also, you might check one of your snares...seems to be kinda buzzing funny too.
There is a bunch of obvious stuff you could do, like doubling gtrs, and stuff like that. That would be nice, but not nec. original in thought.
I'd work on a great distorted gtr sound first.
Then see if you can yank a little midrange out of your vocal chain.
Get those gitters to sound like they are in the same room as your drums...
watch dem clickin' sticks as your cymbals fade in the end!!!
All this complaining...I really did like the drums and the way they sounded so "real". Kinda refreshing, actually.