Bedivere (new original)

highvibrational

highvibrational

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Hi all,
I wrote and recorded this song about a knight from King Arthur's round table named Sir Bedivere of the Perfect Sinew. I know the recording isn't perfect, but it's an effort towards something more complex. Any comments appreciated. Thanks!

 
You're getting better!
You definitely nailed the period/genre.
Seems like you're having fun now :)
 
I thought it was good. It was interesting listening.

Mixwise, I thought the guitar was a bit far back in the mix. The guitar was missing a little high end.

Maybe add just a small bit of reverb. Like a small room. And a very small amount. It's an intimate song and I think you should keep it that way. But it's REAL dry right now.

The doubled vocal could be tighter.

I could hear an edit when the trumpet comes in. There is a different ambience during that section.
 
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