Beatles inspired song about alcohol

[Finn Bjerke]

I have made this Beatles inspired song in cubase. Feedback much appreciated..

http://www.soundclick.com/util/downloadSong.cfm?ID=3596110&key=F347EFE6-A

The songs called "Are you calling me a drunk-phone?"

Im new here and come from Cartoonland (Denmark)

 

[B.SABBATH]

when I hit that link they asked for sign in information..