Battle of the Bands Track

[Jeazii]

This song will be an entry for the Warped Tour Battle of the Bands in Dallas. I am sending this off the have mastered on Friday and I need feedback on the mix and song. Thanks




Battle Cry

 

[DM1]

Three things struck me about the song/mix:

1. Your drummer is rock solid.
2. The kick drum has no punch. It seems like all the low end is coming from the bass guitar. Don't songs in this genre usually have a clicky bass drum?
3. I can't make out most of the words. That could be intentional (and no problem if it is ... That's frequently the case with this style of music.) But if you want the vocal lines to be clearer, you should turn the guitars down.

Good luck in the battle!!