Sounds good to me.
What sort of guitar is it? How did you record it? Is the guitar panned off fractionally left to right? Or is it placed on the L and R at slightly different spots on the pan area?
It's a weird ending coz the song seems all serious and dour and then at the end there is laughing etc. I'm just guessing that you left that in on purpose, and that it's not just random stuff for a slapped together recording.
I liked it, mainly I would like to know what guitar you used, what mic, and what recording set up.
thanks